Walt Disney’s Cartoon Magic

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Walt Disney lived on a farm when he was a young boy. From an early age, walt like to draw animals. He watched the farm animals carefully he made lifelike drawings of them. Walts family had no money for paper but Walt was clever. he drawed a pig on the wall of his house. Walt’s parents were not happy! Then Walts aunt gave him drawing paper.

When walt grew up, he got a job drawing animuls for animated cartoons. creative ideas filled Walts head. the other cartoons were silent so Walt made a cartoon with music and talking characters. This cartoon was called Steamboat Willie. The star was mickey Mouse. Mickey talked and singed, people loved him

Disney’s new ideas changed animated films forever He was full of energy and over the years maked many popular cartoon films. People have been watching Peter Pan, Bambi, and other disney films for years. people will watch them fer years to come. they’ll keep singing songs like When You Wish Upon a Star.